Essence of BloodLust

i couldnt stop freakin laughing! it was so hillarious!! great job, keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man the part with charlie and edward was too funny!

Really good. I liked it. I found it strange how at the beginning your dialogue wasn't correct but then it was at the end. A soft knock at the door ...

Great attention getter! Your way with words and plot that sets the mood of the story are great and make me want to read more! Definatly got me hooked, and ...

beautiful writing but it could have been more personal. I dont feel like you got their personalities across completly. But it was a good fanfic all in all. Keep writing!